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The Beast of Old - Chapter 1 Page 3 by Sandy101010 The Beast of Old - Chapter 1 Page 3 by Sandy101010
Yeah, I'm continuing it anyways xD The thing is, I had to tweak something at the end, but it's still hapening, set before Twilight's coronation.

Hope you like!

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corperalking Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2015
Megan?
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Icefeather31 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2014  Student General Artist
OF COURSE! We have to exterminate all tiny childs now because they'll take over equestria and eat every ones soul Oh Noes! 
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Sandy101010 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Well duh XD
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Icefeather31 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2014  Student General Artist
I should of known earlier, how do I miss something like that? D:
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Sandy101010 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2014  Student Digital Artist
xD 
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klystron2010 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
"And if not contained, it can destroy everything in its way."

SCP-HUMAN
Class: Keter
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Sandy101010 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Haha xD
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RechaDis Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
how a little girl  can destroy the world?
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Sandy101010 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013  Student Digital Artist
She can't xD
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shadowdelta47 Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
WHY DOES EVERBODY HATE HUMANS!!!! Aliens hate us, fairies hate us, ghosts hate us....AND NOW PONIES TOO!!!! WHY!?!
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Sandy101010 Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Haha, maybe because there's a reason XD
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TheWhiteMouthCat Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, like us killing of a stupid way our homeplanet. ha, and they say we are the smartest living forms in the earth...
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MuddyFudger Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol, they think humans are dangerous. So I'm guessing this is the backstory where humans had a nuclear fallout and the resulting radiation mutated horses into colorful, sentient ponies?
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Sandy101010 Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Uh, not so complex, they naturally evolved XD
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MuddyFudger Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
But that doesn't explain what happened to the humans. Humans, being sentient, are extremely difficult to wipe out without something quite a bit more dramatic than conventional firearms.

In other words, nuclear war is the only thing that would stop human progression at this point.
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Sandy101010 Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Um, quite a good point. There's nothing set on this subject here, I left it open, so your theory is quite plausible ^^
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MuddyFudger Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Plus horses would need either a few hundred thousand years of natural evolution, or a good bit of radiation to get to where they are.
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Sandy101010 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Well, from the apocalypse to nowadays in the comic, I say there's a 5 thousand years gap, so maybe a little radiation could be there ^^
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MuddyFudger Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
But that's the problem; radiation takes anywhere from a few hundred-thousand to a few billion years to fully decay into lead. Maybe if all life was wiped out completely and started again?
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Sandy101010 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Well, what about all the nuclear power we make with uranium, if humanity dissapeared, there would be no more control of it. Maybe in a single location where it leaked, a small group of animals had contact with it, and that was how ponykind evolved...
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Enmar123 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013
what kind of test is this...!?!?
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Sandy101010 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013  Student Digital Artist
It as supposed to be the test for her to be transformed into an alicorn, but then the finale came and yeah, this sentence doesn't make sense anymore XD
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d3skinner Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist

"And if not contained, It can destroy everything in Its way."

That proves one thing: we caused our own demise.

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Sandy101010 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Isn't it clear enough? xD
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Arashi93-sama Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013
Id like to think that Equestria was built after human apocalypse xD
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Sandy101010 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013  Student Digital Artist
That's how it it in this story, at least xD
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Charlie-the-Patriot Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
So they DO know about humans, Equestria here I come! who's with me 'cuz I sure as hay ain't doing this alone!
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Sandy101010 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Student Digital Artist
No one knows how it is cannon, but in this comic series, yes xD Haha, everybody wants too, youdon't even have to ask! xD
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SHORTPILGRIM2000 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2013
not to be rude but.... a child could destroy every living soul in the world O_o
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Sandy101010 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Not exactly, but oh well xD
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SHORTPILGRIM2000 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013
:fu: 
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noobymaniac Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013
I'm just a little confused here. Wouldn't keeping it frozen in ice keep it contained?
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Sandy101010 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013  Student Digital Artist
The ice just accumulated around her, just like those stone guys from Easter Island ;D
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superZorthax Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I would rather send it to space.... If I were a pony that is, otherwise, GET DAT GIRL OUTTA THERE!
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ZombieMonkey7 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013
No pressure Twilight, I know Luna and me could take care of it, but you're doing such a good job we'll let you handle it
-Toddles!
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Sandy101010 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013  Student Digital Artist
They always do that xD
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CommanderEX Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013
What is wrong with making Celestia and Luna always put all the burden on Twilight and her friends no matter how heavy it is and never do anything to assist, yea, screw up hundreds years of experience and power, lets just never use it.

Can not someone do comics where mane 6 and princess actually cooperate ?
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Sandy101010 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Well, I think they use most of their power too keep the sun and the moon rotating, sever stopping. But that's how most episodes go, so I just followed the usual idea in this specific concept. 
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CommanderEX Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013
Oh, and I found one think.

In one of your chapters, the villain say that power is like vine, the more time passed, the better it is, he also mentioned that elements are like hundreds years old, but Nightmare Moon was defeated 1000 years ago, and we do not know how many hundreds of years passed before they were used again Discord, and also no one know how long they existed before Celestia and Luna found them, so yea, I would give elements 1500- 2000 years at least.

Also, by that logic, would not it make Celesita and Luna who live so long far more effective to deal with main villain then mane 6 who got elements 2-3 years ago, I know that they are not element bearers any longer, but if elements were reason behind their ascension ( like they played major role in Twilight ascension in season 3 finale ), it mean that Celestia and Luna have are still major players.
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Sandy101010 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013  Student Digital Artist
The whole comic series is set before Twilight's coronation, so  maybe in an epilogue or something she'll have wings, idk xD 
But even if Celestia and Luna were to help, the age gap is still big. Between the day Venaliter possesed Lucía to the day she got out of the ice block, I think around 5,000 years have passed, more or less. Not counting the days he was Mars (which woud be around + 1,500 - 2,000 years).
Also, thank you very much for sharing your thoughts. I thought only the Elements and Lucía alone could defeat him, but now that I've accounted his age, I can see we'll need more help. Seems like the Princesses will be there for the finale too ;D 
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CommanderEX Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013
Oh, and small idea.

Since everyone expect mane 6 to defeat villain, having Celestia and Luna assist in defeating it would be nice unexpected surprise, after all the best ending is unpredictable ending, so feel free to give Cadance and Shining Armor a part in defeating the villain, or even make Twilight ascent thanks to elements as a power buff again final boss, and you can even thrown that not just mane 6 but also many more ponies in Equestria will have to contribute in defeating him ( after all better than 6 friends working together is a kingdom working together ), I know that I am just giving weird ideas out of blue, but feel free to surprise us.
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Sandy101010 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013  Student Digital Artist
If you'd compare the original history, from my head only, and the new one, the one that's actually being produced, you would see this comic series has already changed a lot, for the good, I hope. In the beggining, Venaliter was only Venaliter, a brand new character, no Mars background. Lucía was the tipical over-exited kid, and instead of being really scared by the new situation, she would look amazed to the colorful ponies. She almost had no personality. In the end, the Mane 6 would only use the Elements, and thats it, everyone would be happy again. 
But then it got featured over EQD, and the series-analyzing bronies popped in the comments. They gave me a new perspective, great critiques, which I read carefully, and incorporated into the story you see now. 
One thing I can say is that this author you're speaking too isn't afraid of change - for the good, at least. 
And for the surprising ending, well, I'm almost giving it away this secret I'm keeping. Despite the Princesses now, Lucía is taking a great step. I hope you like what I have been saving from you guys! ;D
Thank you very much for your feedback again! ^^

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CommanderEX Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013
I am glad that my opinion affected the story, as long as princess Celestia and Luna will contribute, i will be satisfied. But I will still look forward  to how the story evolve.
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CommanderEX Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013
Finally an autor who is not afraid to give Celestia and Luna chance to help outside of clishey that they always must be useless because in the show they are always useless or act behind the scene ( I know it is very hard to do, because everyone expect mane 6 to solve the problem and all autors are afraid to give Celestia and Luna any important role, but a good autor can pull it off ).

I am counting on you.

PS: From my perspective mane 6 are like glass canon, they can KO villains, but without elements they are still normal ponies who can be defeated, and it was proved where mane 6 beat 100 changelings but were overun in the end, proving that mane 6 are not one pony army. Alicorns seems more of like a shield and sword, they are strong and hard and can take a punch. So the reason why I want to see mane 6 cooperate with princesses is because 6 ponies can not keep burden of entire Kingdom alone.
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CommanderEX Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013
Celestia and Luna took control over sun and the moon after they defeated Discord, when their were very young ( or in my headcannon after they ascented ), and after hundreds of years they grown up in power to level where Celestia could handle moon and sun alone.

So yea, from my point of view moving sun and moon seems to use only fraction of their power ( and Discord could use it with even less efforts ), so I am sure that they have far more power to spare.

Also, considering that Twilight become alicorn, do you plan to use this in any way or is it to late for that ?
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ThatGuyOnTheInterweb Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Here Twilight, you contain this force that can end the world as we know it.

:icontrollestia2plz::iconsays3plz: Not my problem!
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Sandy101010 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Student Digital Artist
What were you expecting? u-u Both Princesses are going on a trip to Acapulco, meanwhile xD
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ThatGuyOnTheInterweb Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
When you put it that way, I guess 1000 years of ruling Equestria deserves some vacation time. Even in the most critical of times.
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Sandy101010 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Yeah, if you put it that way...
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EqFAzrael Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2013  Student General Artist
Wow... This sure escalated quickly XD
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