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The Beast of Old - Chapter 2 Page 5 by Sandy101010 The Beast of Old - Chapter 2 Page 5 by Sandy101010
And, another one! Seems like when you cry in the real world, somewhere in your mind, it rains! xD
Say what!? Yep, Venaliter was once the God of War! Why not the Underworld? Because screw the underworld, he wants to walk in the sun :icondealwithponyplz: Also, why did he named himself if he was already called Mars (or Ares, for the Geek)? Thaaaat's something that'll be answered next week =P
But it's probably because he's stubborn, and didn't like how those names sounded.

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:iconstarsword:
Starsword Featured By Owner Edited Mar 9, 2015   Writer
This douche-bag in sunglasses is the Roman god of war? Wow... :o (Eek)  I think Equestria might be in trouble. Then again, Aries/Mars gets his power from hatred, conflict and wars. Since there are none of those things in Equestria, Mars shouldn't have much power...
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shadowdelta47 Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Well, who knew Mars was a total American bastard.
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:iconsandy101010:
Sandy101010 Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Not Mars anymore, Venaliter xD
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MuddyFudger Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
So...antagonist flirts with protagonist, protagonist uses self-pity and anemic hostility (it's not effective), antagonist takes that as a threat and reveals himself as a greek god?

Now I don't mean to insult you, but your storywriting needs work.
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:iconsandy101010:
Sandy101010 Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Nah, no flirting here, she's just a kid xD 

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:iconmuddyfudger:
MuddyFudger Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
What about the "you seemed cute" line? Seemed flirtatious to me.
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:iconsandy101010:
Sandy101010 Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013  Student Digital Artist
"Cute" in the sense of "Oh, this puppy is sooo cute!" xD 
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:iconmuddyfudger:
MuddyFudger Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Still seems sketchy
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:iconsandy101010:
Sandy101010 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Well, wasn't my intention, sorry ^^
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:iconmuddyfudger:
MuddyFudger Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Art pun
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:iconsandy101010:
Sandy101010 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Oh, now I get it xD
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Enmar123 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013
o-o ?
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:icondeathclo08:
deathclo08 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013
SERIOUSLY, WHY DO I HEAR ELUSIVE MAN's VOICE WHEN I READ MARS' LINES!!!
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:iconsandy101010:
Sandy101010 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Why, because it fits so much with the voice I imagined for him! xD Seriously, it's really similar! xD
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:icondeathclo08:
deathclo08 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013
oh..... ok then elusive man it is :]
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:iconsandy101010:
Sandy101010 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Ok xD
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gmuffin Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
and I thought he was the human version of Discord... Nope 
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:iconsandy101010:
Sandy101010 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Haha, no, but they are kind of relatives, check this out: sandye101010.deviantart.com/jo…
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:icongmuffin:
gmuffin Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*reads* Blow your mind my mind is officially blown.
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:iconsandy101010:
Sandy101010 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Student Digital Artist
:iconheplz: Even I don't know how I get this things, so yeah xD
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:icongmuffin:
gmuffin Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
lol
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:iconshortpilgrim2000:
SHORTPILGRIM2000 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2013
wait... WHAT THE FUGG!
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:iconsandy101010:
Sandy101010 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013  Student Digital Artist
:iconheplz:
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SHORTPILGRIM2000 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013
Transparent-Fixed o_o 
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:iconsandy101010:
Sandy101010 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Haha xD
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:iconshortpilgrim2000:
SHORTPILGRIM2000 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013
:olol:  _/ *le poorly drawn laptop*
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:iconsandy101010:
Sandy101010 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Haha xD
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SHORTPILGRIM2000 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013
:olol:  o   /  * le poorly drawn accil art laptop*
       ___/
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starkman9000 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I was listening to Mars by Soulfly when I read this. XD
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:iconsandy101010:
Sandy101010 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Haha, coincidence? I think not :iconheplz:



Actually it's probably a coincidence alright xD
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:iconstarkman9000:
starkman9000 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ya, probably. Good story though, can't wait for Ch3 pg4
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:iconsandy101010:
Sandy101010 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thanks! ^^ Not tomorrow, but he next Sunday, it will be released ;D
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:iconstarkman9000:
starkman9000 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Isn't this exciting? Are you excited, 'cause I'm excited, I've never been so excited-- well, except for the time that I saw you walking into town and I went *GASP* but I mean really, who can top that?
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Sandy101010 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Wait what? xD
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Nova225 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013
You know... When I checked the dictionary's definition of 'War', ''all the sins of Humanity'' wasn't in it, so..?

It actually would have made more sense, if he had just been some 'negative being/spirit/creature' which got very powerful because of all the ''bad energies'' he collected from Humanity.
Yeah...
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:iconsandy101010:
Sandy101010 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Mars is his past now. He changed completely so he could survive, there's not a little bit of "Mars" left in him.
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nuke1007 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013
Ares? wtf is he doing in equestria? this is probably one of those times with just like luna, discord will be gone for the whole thing and come out to say "what did i miss?" because i think we can all agree that discord (the god of chaos) probably knows Ares. and i woulden't doubt that they used to be friends considering the two go hand in hand.
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Sandy101010 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Discord isn't the god of chaos, Discordia is. Discord is one of her minions. And in the last chapter they'll all be there, both Luna and Discord himself. And yes, the know each other xD
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nuke1007 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013
first of all excuse my sudden out burst. second of all, good to know =D
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:iconsandy101010:
Sandy101010 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Haha, no problem xD
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J-Dude Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013
So now he's a Grekko/Roman god of war... if that's the case, then why is HE killing everything instead of inciting conflict in others? Wouldn't that be his thing?

He also in no way matches ANY description of Aries/Mars I've ever seen, down to his color of choice... black.

Also, the war god's tactics still suck. Patton would tapdance on this guy's head.

Glad to see she's STARTING to come to terms with her loss though. Forgive me, I might have gotten ahead of myself... given the story decided to wheelie itself into high-gear from the very beginning.

See, the problem is something that happens when you start with the feature conflict right out the gate. With no buildup and ALL plot, making a story about nothing but the third act, it can make the rest of it feel a little slow...
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Sandy101010 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013  Student Digital Artist
He used to be the god of war, but now he has changed. It's only in his memories now. And his color isn't pure black, is a very dark red, if you eye drop it. And the plot feels rushed because, yes, it is rushed. I have to make sure to finish this project by the end of the year, as next year I'll be too busy with school and work (more than I'm right now). Sorry for that.
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:iconblock1431:
block1431 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013
Oh crap! He's Poseidon!
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:iconsandy101010:
Sandy101010 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013  Student Digital Artist
He's actually Ares xD
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:iconblock1431:
block1431 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013
I know, I was joking around. However, we all know he's really Zeus in disguise as Poseidon who's in disguise as Ares, only they're going by their Roman names.
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Sandy101010 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Sure xD
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:iconblock1431:
block1431 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013
Neptune-- whatever.
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InkRose98 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
No, Neptune is the god of the ocean. He's Mars, the Roman god of war.
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:iconblock1431:
block1431 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013
I was joking-- you purposely get the villains name wrong to piss them off. 
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OfficialAzurewolf Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013
Well there goes my theory, :XD:
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